“Yes,” the purple-haired girl acquiesced quietly, as if such was a common event for her. She made no mention of her now visibly twitching hard-on, which seemed to strain for further attention as Haruhi’s hand withdrew. A fingertip circled the crown and brought another spasm, sharp enough to cause another wet slap as Yuki’s penis collided with her taut stomach. The tip almost nestled in her navel with the way she was bent like that, Tsuruya couldn’t help but notice, and the surprisingly pale-skinned shaft looked thick indeed, a comfortable girth with which to fill one’s hand.

There was a moment’s silence, filled with only the sound of Tsuruya’s heavy breathing and the rolling ocean surf. Haruhi’s fingers caressed the tip of Yuki’s penis, almost absently, while she gazed back at Tsuruya standing dumbly on the sand as if waiting for the green-haired girl to say something. That rigid member continued to twitch and jump against Haruhi’s touches, though the occasional spurts of semen seemed to have stopped, now the blunt tip leaked a slimy clear trail of pre-cum that dribbled and trickled down the length of that thick shaft. The longer she stared, the more Tsuruya couldn’t take her eyes off that hard cock sticking up from Yuki’s crotch, where it most definitely didn’t belong.

And yet, something about it fit. A strange thought that wouldn’t leave her alone, nagging her more and more until it was all she could think about, just that long penis that stood like a neon flag of sexual arousal from the lavender-haired girl’s crotch.

“It’s been so long since we saw you last.” Finally, Haruhi’s voice shattered the silence, cheerful and welcoming as it had been since their arrival. “I know there’ve been some changes in all of our lives, haven’t there Yuki-chan?”

Yuki nodded absently, still eyeing her book even while Haruhi began giving her a handjob, fingers coiling snugly around that rigid member and sliding up and down along the pre-slicked length.

“Well, I think this is a perfect chance for a reunion! Once Mikuru gets back this evening, we’ll all have a beach party together before Tsuruya-san goes back home tomorrow.”

She stood up, and Yuki followed her lead naturally. Her legs swung out past where Haruhi had perched herself at the edge of the recliner while jerking her companion off, and as they did Tsuruya had a first-class view of the goods, so to speak. Yuki reached back to rest her book neatly on the pillow at the head of the recliner, oblivious to Tsuruya’s staring. The slender hourglass shape of her toned young body complimented her ivory complexion, however she managed to keep it under the baking sun like that, and her snow-white skin in turn contrasted the dark blue top she wore, making her modest breasts stand out more without looking too big. They looked firm, in fact, and tender, much like the soft flesh of her thighs. Thighs which parted nonchalantly to afford Tsuruya a look at her naked sex.

Except there was none. Where Tsuruya had expected to see the softly swollen mound of a female mons, or perhaps the skimpiest thong in all of existence, Yuki was blessed in other ways. That long, rigid rod of cock-flesh led back down to the apex of her thighs, rooted deeply into her crotch just as it should be. Below it, her testes were comfortably average-sized, perhaps a little above, and they hung an inch or so down from the base of her penis. Or they would have had she not been seated at that very moment, for the sensitive orbs of Yuki’s testicles were currently resting on the white plastic between her thighs. The sensation obviously got through to the oddly-endowed girl, even if she showed nothing of it on her face, for her cock gave another violent twitch as she shifted forward.

Yuki stood, still completely careless of her being naked from the waist down, or more accurately from her ribcage down given the high hem of the top. She locked eyes with Tsuruya once more, still wearing the same expressionless face. Her features only twisted into a mild look of surprise and erotic pleasure when Haruhi reached down her hand and cupped the half-clad girl’s balls in her palm and began squeezing them gently with her fingers…

“Yuki’s a little bit of an exhibitionist,” she explained. “I apologise if her behaviour offended you at all.” She emphasised the statement by moving her hand from those very full-looking balls up to clutch her fingers tightly around Yuki’s shaft just behind the thick crown and giving a slow, firm squeeze that brought a gasp from the sexually ambiguous girl.

“Oh, n-no, of course not,” Tsuruya stammered, smiling a little awkwardly. What a truly bizarre situation she appeared to have gotten herself into. Still she failed to keep her gaze from wandering down Yuki’s body, down over those firm, rounded breasts and her taut stomach, down to the turgid phallus that throbbed and spat in the warm embrace of Haruhi’s fingers as they slid ever faster up and down along it.

It looked as though Haruhi was jerking the lavender-haired girl off right in front of her, pumping her to orgasm with one hand. She stood by Yuki’s side, watching the other girl’s face contort further into increasingly poorly restrained ecstasy, her fingers quickly sliding over and over along the length of Yuki’s penis. There was a rhythmic squelching noise from the accumulation of pre-cum coating Yuki’s cock as that hand worked tirelessly to bring an orgasm from the now blushing girl, who by the looks of things had already had one or two that afternoon not so long ago. The sight of Nagato Yuki standing in front of her in nothing but a pair of sunglasses and a very revealingly tight spandex top, a thickly erect cock jutting from her loins as if it belonged there, her spine arcing upward and her toes curling into the sand as her breathing became louder and shallower. Suzumiya Haruhi with her hand wrapped round Nagato’s penis, furiously masturbating the quiet girl under another’s watchful gaze, an expression on her face of sadistic enjoyment.

With a sudden, and rather uncharacteristically cute squeak, Yuki’s knees buckled and came together. Her lower back arched and her hands grasped the air at her sides, knuckles turning white. A hint of tooth showed as she bit down sharply on her bottom lip. The fingers wound tightly around her cock slid right down to the very base, squeezing rapidly. Up came Haruhi’s hand, sliding smoothly to the very head of Yuki’s erection, forcing her foreskin to slide out across that bloated glans until only the very tip showed. As if milking the orgasm out, the action followed through with a sudden thick white burst from the end of Yuki’s throbbing member, flying into the air with considerable force and splashing down onto the sand almost a metre in front of her.

“Ah!”

Yuki could barely manage to utter a single startled breath as that hand slid back down her aching prick, peeling her foreskin back as far as it would go in the process, right to the very base of that twitching column of flesh. As Haruhi’s fingers hit the lavender-haired girl’s crotch, a second gush of semen flew from Yuki’s cock just as the first, and then a dozen more in rapid succession, like a burst pipe spewing its contents out onto the sandy shore. Each successive spurt gave less distance, until eventually the torrential spray was just a thick oozing trickle that dangled from the tip of Yuki’s penis like some obscene icicle.

Her hand reached out, arm winding about Haruhi’s waist to hold herself steady as her legs trembled beneath her with the powerful aftershocks of what could easily have been the third or fourth, or even tenth orgasm that afternoon. After quite a while of laboured breathing, a sweating, red-faced Yuki looked her companion in the eye with as much of a smile as Yuki, for all her restrained expressions, ever gave and spoke, in a soft tone.

“I think she enjoyed that.

To be continued. Soon, hopefully.

>>4030
You are the best and also I like your idea you suggested on /a/.

>>4031
Well thanks. I've gotten a few comments in the past about the icicle line above, too, for some reason.

Also, being a tripfag sucks. Especially a tripfag in disguise.

TRANSFMOERS!

Somehow, I think Tsuruya would be more like... shocked for 0.5 seconds or maybe even full three seconds.

After that, she'd probably go something like "Oh hey Nagato, long time no see! You have a dick now, nice!! grab OH look at that thing go AHAHAHA!! Haru-nyan, you still have the most interesting friends! AHAHAHAHA!"

Nice story though.

>>4034
I've read 8 of the novels and I don't really see Tsuruya being that energetic.
I'm not the OP

I just put it down to that she hasn't seen Haruhi and company for years, is jetlagged, and has never had to deal with Azure Coast sun before. That shit is nasty, seriously.

>>4036
Okay

I'll check back on this later I hope our suggestions helped.

Got anymore written by now?

more erotic fanfics plz

please don't let this die...

It won't die OP is just sleeping.

Wake up quicker! =P

I'm here, don't worry. In the process of writing part 2, the pool scene, and it'll be a lot bigger than the first part I can say that much. It's also surprisingly difficult.

>>4045
Oh,ok
I await your beautiful work then.

Terrfic job so far.

Mr OP, you have made me cum enough bricks to build a house.
Keep it up, please, I'm saving a bundle on building material.

B&NTD from /a/. I'd appreciate it if someone would be so kind as to direct any anonymous who were waiting over on 4chan to this thread here instead kthx.

>>4049
banned for what?

>>4049
There was a thread asking what the link was to here and I gave it to them.
Also how long is the ban?

>>4051
Two more days.

>>4050
"/a/ is not a fanfic site"

>>4052
lol
Any expected time for when you will post more?

“Ah…I’ve been dying to wear this since this morning. You think it suits me?”

When Haruhi Suzumiya laughed, it was a deep, full-bodied sound that rose up from her stomach, not the maniacal cackle of a perverted schoolgirl. Tsuruya couldn’t help noticing the way the other girl’s breasts bounced in the tight confines of her slick white top.

“I had it tailored to fit,” Haruhi proclaimed quite proudly. Her hand again met the green haired girl’s near bare backside with a slap, bringing a startled yelp from Tsuruya. “It’s a private pool, and there’s nobody around here besides me and Yuki-chan. She certainly won’t care what you wear.”

Tsuruya tugged at the straps of the incredibly tight sling bikini she had found waiting in her wardrobe that morning, smiling impishly at her hostess. The slick emerald fabric was barely wide enough to hide her nipples, and not thick enough to conceal the prominent bumps they formed. “I guess I’ve been a bit out of it lately. I feel so much more…well, like myself, wearing something like this.” She laughed, reached back a hand and ran her fingers under the rear strap of the swimsuit. The narrow strip of what was probably latex ran down the length of her spine and dove between her buttocks, disappearing into the cleft of her upper thighs and curling up tightly against her crotch in front, hiding only what it needed to. The way the material split again just above her mound had a nice effect to it at least, framing her navel and accentuating the toned, slender feminine curvature of her middle. And with something like this, she probably wouldn’t have to worry about tan lines, not that there’d be much tanning going on so late at night.

“Well go on, then,” insisted Haruhi with a grin, giving her another playful swat on the rear that made Tsuruya’s firm buttocks quiver. “Go right out and I’ll be with you in a little while.” Tsuruya gave her a fleeting glance over one shoulder, a sultry little half-smirk with her tongue peeking out the corner of her mouth as the mistress of the house left the room.

The glass was mirrored on the outside, so once she had slid the door shut and heard the soft click of the latch, Tsuruya could see only her own vague reflection in the dim outdoor lighting. She stood for a moment and observed herself in the glass, turning her body to catch the soft lighting.

She had not filled out as Haruhi seemed to have done, nor was she anywhere near as buxom as Mikuru, but feminine was well within her reach. She had shaped into a fine hourglass figure, slender but muscular shoulders and torso tapering down to a delicate, narrow waist, showing off a lithe musculature across her abdomen. Her hips formed a smooth arc away from her midsection and down into startlingly long, soft-skinned thighs. Her legs stretched down and down, dainty knees and slender calves, and then her pale, petite feet nestled into a pair of narrow sandals, jade varnish showing on her nails. Her hair, a similar shade of deep, lustrous green, fell down her back in a wave all the way to her ankles, rounded off loosely at the end. A few strands curled forward around her sides, as if framing the bared outer curves of her modest breasts, easily enough to fill out the skimpy bikini she had been loaned.

A quiet splashing noise tore her attention away from her own reflection and towards the pool.

The pool itself was backlit by submerged lighting, providing a sense of ambience, calm and peaceful. The only other illumination was the standing lights around the patio area nearest the house, leaving the far end of the pool in relative darkness. Several white plastic reclining deckchairs were arranged on the smooth grey tiles, and upon one of these chairs was neatly piled a pink towel, two paperback novels, an absolutely tiny piece of black fabric and a pair of narrow-framed glasses.

Yuki Nagato was idly stroking her way from one end of the pool some ten metres away to the other in a slow, methodical rhythm. Her sleek, slender body cut through the crystal water in an effortless glide, her hands pawing through the water barely made a sound. Her fingers touched the edge and she twisted in the water, tucking her body up and bringing her feet to touch the side of the pool. She kicked off against the thick tiled wall on her back, stretching out almost erotically.

The water coursed over her front as she broke the surface with her turn, making her pale skin glisten in the soft yellow-orange artificial light. The moisture clung to her flesh, beading on her breasts, glinting off her nipples that rose stiffly in the cool evening air as if reaching up to the surface to gasp for air. Her erection, which seemed to be ever-present, also broke the water’s surface and rose up lewdly like a forward-swept shark’s fin cutting through the water as Yuki pushed off along the pool again for another lap. She drifted for a good way on her back without kicking, arms stretched out up above her, legs held taught, like an arrow flying through the water with only the front of her showing above the surface.

Tsuruya blinked and surreptitiously pressed her knees together a little. It almost felt dirty to be watching something like this, but try as she might she couldn’t find a way to pull her eyes away from that slick, soaking body. Yuki’s eyes were closed as if in idle thought, and the same emotionless blankness was drawn across her face just as always. Tsuruya licked her lips.

“Hope I’m not intruding,” she called out, “please, don’t mind me. In fact, I think I owe you an apology for this morning. Didn’t mean to make such a…fuss about…” She trailed off when the lavender-haired girl failed to respond.

Yuki ignored her and continued her laps. She rolled over to one side like a cat stretching itself out, bringing one arm up and over to start pulling through the water again. Her legs began to shift once more, kicking lazily, rolling her hips round further until she was face-down in the water again and only her bare buttocks and her flexing shoulders and the thick head of lavender coloured hair showed above the surface. She drifted off towards the far end of the pool, into the darkness.

Tsuruya smiled to herself as the image of Yuki’s totally naked body sprawled out before her so openly filled her mind, then focused herself on one of the reclining deckchairs nearby. She settled herself down and laid back to gaze up at the sky instead. Night outside of the city was certainly an experience to remember, the sky full of stars like a paint-speckled canvas of black. The moon hung in the sky so large and bright, but only the soft luminance of the poolside lights reached the water’s surface.

There she lay, only half-aware of her consciousness drifting away as she watched the stars rotating slowly above her like a giant cosmic flywheel. The soft sound of Yuki’s swimming in the distance like the lapping surf on the shore soothed her mind.

She was no longer alone. Somewhere off to her left, the gentle hush of slow breathing, the almost inaudible drip drip drip of water on the tiles. Tsuruya blinked awake and turned her head to identify the source of the noise.

Having given up on her laps by the look of things, Yuki now stood on the poolside tiles in naught but her own skin. The last traces of the water trickled down her body to join the slowly spreading puddle on the floor, her skin shining in the dim light, the moisture leaving gleaming trails down her inner thighs. Her arms were held down in front of her, out of sight, and Tsuruya watched as her shoulders slid and bunched together, back muscles flexing, her firmly toned buttocks twitching occasionally. Her breathing was soft and shallow, her spine arched.

Tsuruya stood up slowly, quietly, so as not to disturb her pool-mate. She readjusted the bikini that had shifted dangerously close to exposing her nipples and then walked over towards the lavender haired girl. Her hand reached out to Yuki’s shoulder and pulled gently.

Why she didn’t just say something was a question that never occurred to her. Perhaps, in the end, it was best that she didn’t.

Yuki turned surprisingly quickly at the brief touch to face the green haired girl, though their eyes made no contact since Yuki’s head was tipped back, eyes shut, and the very slightest expression of pleasurable tension showed on her naturally inexpressive face. Her back arched up sharply, a soft whine escaping her lips. Tsuruya could only stare at the sight of her nakedness as thick, slimy white strings of semen shot forth to land on her breasts and belly and thighs, painting the green haired girl with a messy trail of whiteness all along her front. She gasped in surprise, and felt her nipples suddenly straining against the fabric of that obscenely skimpy bikini with aching rigidity. Her knees pressed tightly together as moisture began flowing down her inner thighs. Yuki’s semen was drooling down her belly, slow and thick and hot like treacle.

For a moment, there was silence but for the sound of Yuki’s laboured breathing. Tsuruya stood there, dumbfounded, her cheeks reddening slightly as fluid ran freely down her legs.

“Oh,” said Yuki finally in that mousy small voice of hers. “Please excuse me. I seem to have accidentally…”

“No, no, that’s fine,” Tsuruya interrupted loudly, waving a dismissive gesture with one hand. Back came that inimitable grin of hers in no time. “You don’t have to apologise for…” She trailed off as her eyes caught on the sight of that throbbingly erect member rising from the dip of Yuki’s crotch area. Not, she noticed, from the apex of her pelvic mound. Her curiosity piqued. Out she reached with one hand, leaving her words behind her, with the tip of her tongue peeking from the corner of her mouth in concentration. Her fingers caressed the smooth flesh, wound their way carefully around the curve of Yuki’s member, clutching it into her palm just behind the head. It was hot to the touch and twitched in her hand almost impatiently. Her fingers closed until her thumb and forefinger overlapped, trapping that fleshy thing in her grasp.

“How…how did,” she began, half-distracted.

“Haruhi gave me this,” Yuki explained in her usual soft-spoken voice. She seemed not to mind Tsuruya’s hand on her penis, standing there with her blank expression as if being naked with an erection in front of another girl didn’t bother her in the slightest, not that it likely did. She reached up to the green haired girl’s chest and used the tips of two of her fingers to smear a thick glob of her own semen into the skin of Tsuruya’s rather modest cleavage as if it were a perfectly ordinary thing to do. “Is it satisfactory?”

Tsuruya blinked back up at the naked girl, puzzled. “You mean for me?” Her hand squeezed down involuntarily around Yuki’s erection, bringing a soft breath of pleasure from the lavender haired girl and a sharp twitch of that long cock as it spat out another long streamer of thick white fluid onto Tsuruya’s exposed stomach.

“Well,” she continued slowly, drawing out her words, “I suppose it is pretty impressive. It’s so big…” She gave another gentle squeeze with her fingers around that broad shaft, giggling at the way it twitched and flexed as if trying to escape her grasp. Her thumb flicked up and over the bluntly rounded tip, caressing the sensitive end of Yuki’s prick. She pressed delicately over the narrow slit in the tip, just in time to watch another burst of semen spray out in a wild formation, forced to squirt out in all directions by the pressure of her thumb covering the opening; it splashed across Yuki’s belly and up Tsuruya’s forearm to her elbow.

Tsuruya giggled again. How oddly enjoyable this was rapidly becoming. She gripped tightly around the shaft of Yuki’s penis again and slowly stroked her hand right down to the base, which was rooted low and deep on the lavender haired girl’s crotch. The heel of her palm bumped against Yuki’s hanging testes, which responded by pulling up taught against her crotch. Another sliver of fluid came arcing from the swollen crimson tip of Yuki’s cock, this time angled upward as far as her molester could manage so that the semi-clear liquid landed in a long, slippery trail from Yuki’s breastbone right down to her abdomen. More oozed from the tip, now completely clear as the last of her orgasm drained out, and the stuff began pooling obscenely in her navel.

“Is this real? I mean…wow…you really have a dick?”

Yuki nodded slowly. Her cock, as if in reply, twitched so energetically that Tsuruya was startled out of her hold on that long shaft of pale flesh, leaving it free to swing and then thwack up against Yuki’s belly with a lewd wet slap.

“Haruhi said that I should make you feel welcome here. Please feel free to do whatever you like with me.”

Faced with such a tempting offer, Tsuruya gave the naked girl in front of her a truly devious grin. Her hand darted back out to grasp that thick piece of cock-flesh and squeeze, stroking up along the length of it, rolling Yuki’s foreskin out as far as it would reach, which turned out to be only about halfway along her crown.

“It’s almost like…natural.” Tsuruya giggled. “Who made this for you? It must have cost a fortune!”

Yuki shook her head slowly. “Haruhi gave this to me,” she explained once again, as if that were explanation enough.

Tsuruya smirked at her mischievously and squeezed down tight around the bulbous head of Yuki’s member, savouring the quiet hissing sound that elicited. With another swift move of her hand, she had the naked girl by the balls, grasping them loosely in her fingers with the heel of her palm pressed up against the base of Yuki’s prick. Her bare forearm rested against the underside of that long stiffness, feeling every throb of the quiet girl’s pulse, every sensitive twitch, every pulse of fluid squeezing up her urethral channel to ooze from the crimson tip. Tsuruya’s fingers squeezed softly, bring out a sharp moan that had Yuki tossing her head back, wide-mouthed at the sensation.

“So I suppose that’s what Haruhi meant when she said I’d be entertained.” The green haired girl chuckled to herself, enjoying the feeling of her forearm becoming increasingly slick and slippery with the ever-flowing dribble of Yuki’s pre. “That makes you the entertainment.”

“Yes,” gasped Yuki in her mousy schoolgirl voice. “I…am…to obey…any order you give me.”

Tsuruya lit up with an expression of delight. Her forearm slid along the twitching cock as she withdrew it slow and smoothly, her fingers lifting Yuki’s testes up and then letting them drop again, fingers arcing to rake upwards along the underside of that rigid member, her nails scraping lightly along the sensitive flesh made Yuki grit her teeth and hiss.

“Blow yourself,” was Tsuruya’s simple command. Yuki proved surprisingly enthusiastic in her obedience. The naked, lavender haired girl stood twitching for a moment, her erection slapping against her stomach and adding to the sticky mess of her navel. Then down she went to her knees on the smooth, earthen tiles, squatted, then onto her back. In an impressive show of flexibility, Yuki curled herself up until her thighs were pressed tightly against her breasts, squashing them almost flat, and tucked both arms under her thighs to pull her knees right up either side of her head. Her abdominal muscles crunched up tight with the strain but she showed no signs of discomfort as her nose slid along the curved underside of her own penis, lips parting shamelessly to let the long member sink into her waiting mouth, tongue forming a u-shaped tube to guide it in.

With no considerable difficulty, Yuki’s lips slid right down to the very base of her own erection until her balls rested against her delicate nose and her chin was pressed tightly into the mound of her pubis. Her throat bulged slightly just behind her chin, showing exactly how deep the penetration went, that slightly curved cock reaching right down into her throat with ease. Tsuruya was unable to contain a twisted little spring of joy from bringing up a laugh to her lips as she watched the naked girl begin suckling on her own penis. Yuki’s eyes slid shut in concentration and her throat convulsed visibly as she swallowed on the end of that long member.

In a short while, Yuki was producing the most obscene gurgling, spluttering noises, still her throat muscles working away frantically, and jets of white squirted out of her lips wrapped tight around the base of her prick, splashing on the tiled ground and adding to the puddle of fluid that now covered her entire belly. The flow seemed to rise incrementally, semen leaking from Yuki’s mouth every second or two in a steady rhythm, with slightly more force each time. Then the lavender-haired girl made a noise that could only be likened to someone with a mouthful of water trying not to cough, her face screwing up into an expression of frustration. Once more came that noise, this time a thin squirt of spunk flew out with enough force to hit Tsuruya on the leg. The third time, Yuki lost her composure completely, and a veritable torrent of semen gushed out around the base of her prick from her overstuffed mouth, twin fountains jetting from her nostrils. She coughed, spluttered, coughed again, choking on the unstoppable flow.

Tsuruya clapped her hands together gleefully, laughing wholeheartedly while her own nectar dribbled down her naked inner thighs practically unchecked. She watched Yuki’s eyes roll back in her head as more and more cum flowed from her nose and mouth, drenching the lavender-haired girl’s tightly curled body. Still Yuki maintained her posture, keeping that length buried deep in her throat as it gushed fluid down her gullet by the litre.

“Stop,” she commanded, and Yuki did so, collapsing flat on her back on the tiled ground. Her lips slid from her erection with a lewd wet slurp and semen jetted up from the tip in high arcing strings that landed on the naked girl’s face and chest. Soon her orgasm died down at last, her prick left twitching torturously, her body a sloppy mess.

“Tell me,” Tsuruya began as she stepped onto the naked, cum-splattered girl, resting the bare sole of her right foot on Yuki’s erection. “Is it always like this around here?” She smirked as her heel ground into the base of that twitching member, making Yuki gasp in response, writhing on the ground beneath her. More long streams of semen leapt up along the lavender-haired girl’s belly and chest, lost in the thick mess already staining her skin.

More to come later on. Including but not limited to more really messy oral, double-fucking, surprise sodomy, MILFkuru, and various other kinky madness.

>>4058
I can't wait.

>>4027
>>4028
>>4029
>>4054
>>4055
>>4056
>>4057
You sir are great at writing.

...Superb

Yes, this is excellent writing. Do you have any other sites where you've posted stories?

I think this is his only Haruhi story.

>>4078

Doesn't have to be Haruhi. I'd still like to read it.

Sadly, as mentioned, this is the only one relevant to this board.

>>4083
Okay

The cum coming out of Yuki's nose sort of suprised me.

>>4083

Like I said, I'm also interested in unrelated stories you've written.

>>4084
I've shot milk out of my nose once by laughing while drinking, so it's perfectly plausible. Besides, I think it's hot.

>>4087
Zone does the cum-out-of-nose in every freaking flash where possible.

Oh well. Nice story anyway. I'm highly waiting for actual penetration.

could people post other haruhi fanfics too? it would be nice to have other tales to read while waiting for an update.

>>4090
maybe in a separate thread... or this one will get confusing

>>4091
Yeah it would.

I like you work keep up the good job.

Me again. Next bit might be a while coming since I'm busy most of today and tomorrow. Sorry guys.

>>4097
damn, mind telling us what will be coming up next then?

If I recall I remember him saying there would be a messy titfuck courtesy of Mikuru.

>>4099
Oppai, oppai!

>>4100
What does that mean?

>>4101
It means lurk more. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cMPB8iVK20Q&mode=related&search=

>>4102
So what are you busying doing?

>>4101
Oppai is boob in Japanese.

>>4105
Oh okay.

>>4103
Rewriting dog knot blowjob scene for Katawa Shoujo at the moment.

I hope you can do a update today since it has been 2 days now.

>>4116

Meh, don't rush the guy. Writing well is hard work.

I've waited many months for the pool scene already...

>>4118
Yeah I know but so have I.

You forget that I'm waiting for it too. I can't just force this stuff out. If I try, it just ends up garbage. It'll happen when it happens and all I can promise is to try to accelerate the process.

Endless thanks to everyone who's waited so long already.

Dog porn finished. More dickgirl Yuki on its way in the next couple days hopefully.

>>4131
Was that piece for the actual game, or something you posted? If the latter, is there a link to it? I remember seeing a thread on /a/ about that, bit that was a week ago or so.

Also, This Yuki/Tsuruya thing is the best damn erotic ANYTHING I've seen in awhile. I <3 me some Tsuruya.

>>4132
http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=280&start=30
Just a random fan-made scene.

>>4134
Your internets are in the mail.

I was wondering where are you writing your blue drop fanfic?

>>4158
On my laptop lol? ¯\(°_o)/¯

Can't post it on /a/ cause I'd get JANITORB& again and /u/ doesn't want it.

>>4159
Forgot my damn tripcode again.

Fic-wise, what exactly have you written, and what do you still have copies of?
I know there's this, the Blue Drop one, the Lily rewrite for KS... Anything else?

>>4163
I think he wrote a little Nanoha dickgirl scene.

>>4164
Nope. I wrote the Monster Princess one, the Utawarerumono one (both Kamyuu and Carrier-sex), Reinforce's bukkake party, this, Blue Drop, and...some others. Which I forget lol.

Also wow that is one really really determined janitor.

I thought you said it would be here in a few days but it has been 5.

>>4167
Writing shit isn't as easy as just typing any old thing down you know.

>>4168
tl;dr;
>>4167
Do it yourself then.

What the fuck. Do you people really get off to this futa shit?

sage

>>4179
lol obvious troll is obvious.

Blue Drop one is finished.

>>4179
YOU BEST BE JOKING NIGGER

>>4180
Hot buttered damn. Have you posted it yet?

>>4225
Have now.

it's been over 2 weeks ; ;

>>4249
Whining won't get it done faster.

>>4250
D: I wish it could though.

>>4121
That almost sounds like you are trying to shake us off.

I'm a patient person.
Even his Blue Drop fic got finished, eventually... so too, must this. Will this

Something. My grammar sucks today.

>>4287
Apologies. My talent with words is somewhat lacking when it comes to conversation.

>>4289
That happens to me all the time.

Also, sorry it's taking so long. Might have some free time to do more this weekend, hopefully.

>>4291
I'm hoping

>>4165

If anybody has any of these, could they post them somewhere? In particular I'm hoping for the Utawarerumono ones.

>>4314
Well, like where?

>>4315

Well, like, rapidsearch.yi.org?

>>4314
This is one of the Utawarerumono stories.

>>4319
I hate you it's been this long and you say you'll get to it before christmas

Any news on haruhi story?

>>4317
How do I uploaded on rapidsearch lol?

>>4322

You upload the .doc on rapidshare or megaupload or sendspace or something [which is trivial, considering the typical size of .doc], and then submit the link to rapidsearch?

>>4323
i r tries dat

Uploaded to sendspace under "collected works of friction." Megaupload won't work and rapidshare sucks shit anyway.

>>4325

Thanks a lot!

>>4325
Er... where? Sendspace isn't exactly searchable. Or it is, and it's hiding from me.

>>4330
http://rapidsearch.yi.org/

>>4332
"Couldn't connect to database. Whoops."

>>4334
then try again later... like now.

same link DB but not down as often: http://rs.4chan.org/

yay, got it.

>>4444

>>4357
...what?

So where is OP now?

>>4359
Busily trying to finish the damn thing before Christmas.

>>4360

Whoa, the whole thing? Or just the next scene?

>>4361
The pool scene IS the whole thing. There won't be any more of this. I never intended to even start the second part at all, in fact. This was just done by popular demand. And my annoying tendency to cling to an idea.

>>4362

I for one am quite fond of that tendency of yours and will support it whole-heartedly to the best of my ability.

>>4362
I won the coin toss from yesterday so can you atleast write Yuki fucking tsuruya or the messy titfuck?

>>4364
If all goes well, I'll be doing both.

>>4366
terrific please say it will be before January?

found out yuki's dick is "Improbably large, but not ridiculously huge. Like forearm sized."

A kind anon directed me to here and I'd have to say I'm pretty glad I did since you wrote a part I didn't even know about.

Just checked, over five thousand words. Definitely one of the longest I've ever done.

Gonna have to go with discontinuity for the next part. It's just not flowing well enough from the current end, so timeskip scene change it is. Should have more in a few hours, or if not, early tomorrow.

>>4369
Can you explain and make yourself more clear please?

one question is Asakura in this? Because they would be pretty sexy.

>>4440
It's probably asking too much of the OP.
But my god, that would be lovely, given that 80% of her non-h fanart focuses on her ass, something I've not approved of so hard since Rider.

>>4438
Do what you must, good sir. I'd rather have slow pace and frequent updates than no news and sporadic additions.

>>4444
I'm afraid I've never actually watched the show, or read any of the novels or anything. That's why everyone's so out of character already. Having had absolutely no exposure to Asakura besides "KNIFE-TAN!" memes on /a/, I'd be hard-pressed to write her in.

Only like one episode focuses on her but she can also use data manipulation like Yuki

She's yandere. And that's basically it. Sweet an kind most of the time, but then she goes fucking psycho on Kyon.

Since Kyon isn't in the picture she can just be sweet and kind

>>4449

To be fair, she was sweet and kind even when she was trying to kill Kyon. She still did it with a smile and a playful attitude. Then again, the whole debate on whether she's truly yandere is overrated anyways.

Or I could just give MILFkuru a big butt.

Great idea

So what scene are you working on now since I'm sort of confused

Since you don't know Asakura's character I think a big butt MILFkuru will do just fine!

Also,Merry Christmas!

>>4454
Merry Christmas. Here's hoping Santa doesn't claw you to death.

>>4454
Wait, just how big does anon want this ass? Because there's ass and then there's ass.

Are we talking like http://www.sos-dan.com/himg/src/1196525043149.jpg

<- Or like this?

Some motivation for the next scene. Maybe.

>>4463
Something like that!

>>4463
This is massively fappable, right here. Also, eagerly awaiting progress and Mi-lf-kuru.

And it's kind of funny that you mention never having watched or read Haruhi... that's pretty much how I learned anything I know about Sailor Moon: from lemons.

>>4463
That is THE perfect ass

I failed. Sorry guys. Expect more when I is no longer ill.

>>4497
hope you feel better

happy new year

thank you OP for telling me this was here

No worries.
Believe in us who believes in you!

Er... wrong board for that, sorry.

Another pic for motivation of the next scene.

Oh, have one more. Not sure if Tsuruya's gonna have a dick in this story, we'll see.

Which Mikuru will be participating? High school student Mikuru? Hot MILF Mikuru? Perhaps both? Would it be able to involve the latter helping to "coerce" (read: force) the former to do naughty things against her will? Anything even remotely along those lines?

Is anyone even listening anymore...?

I'm still refreshing this thread now and then, hoping to see the new 'fic.

I thought hot MILFkuru was participating so I never questioned beyond that

I just found this today (so I havn't been waiting a tenth as long as you people), but HOLY SHIT this writing is amazing. Erotic or not, write a fuckin' book my friend!

If I remember right, this whole thing came about from some fantasizing about this picture... was it in /a/? Long time ago, anyway...

shit sux

>>4703
Or this shooped version of it.

>>4165
Anyone have Reinforce's bukkake party saved?

>>4712
it's in the rapidshare mentioned earlier in the thread

>>4713
Sorry, the file you requested is not available.